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My new bike
작성자 : iam*** · 2016-12-27
I got a new bike last sunday. My mother bought it for me. Now, I will tell you how I got my bike.
My old bike was very old. It was over 6 years. So, I need new one. So, we went to a bike store in downtown, last Sunday. We searched for best bike. But blue one is too big, and red one is too expensive. And white one is small. But black one is perfect-sized and not so expensive. So, we bought the black one. When we are going out of the store, I couldn’t wait to try my bike. So, I rode bike at the near by park. I rode my bike back to my house, too.
Today, I rode my bike in schoolyard. And I rode 10 times around the schoolyard. So, I am tired, but I want to ride my bike tomorrow, too. If it’s not raining. Because, I don't like my bike and me getting wet.
My old bike was very old. It was over 6 years. So, I need new one. So, we went to a bike store in downtown, last Sunday. We searched for best bike. But blue one is too big, and red one is too expensive. And white one is small. But black one is perfect-sized and not so expensive. So, we bought the black one. When we are going out of the store, I couldn’t wait to try my bike. So, I rode bike at the near by park. I rode my bike back to my house, too.
Today, I rode my bike in schoolyard. And I rode 10 times around the schoolyard. So, I am tired, but I want to ride my bike tomorrow, too. If it’s not raining. Because, I don't like my bike and me getting wet.
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I got a new bike last Sunday. My mother bought it for me. Now, I will tell you how I got my bike.
My old bike was very old. It was over 6 years old. So, I need new one. So, we went to a bike store in downtown, last Sunday. We searched for the best bike. But blue one is too big, and red one is too expensive. And white one is small. But black one has perfect-sized and not so expensive. So, we bought the black one. When we are going out of the store, I couldn't wait to try my bike. So, I rode bike at the near by park. I rode my bike back to my house, too.
Today, I rode my bike in schoolyard. And I rode 10 times around the schoolyard. So, I am tired, but I want to ride my bike tomorrow, too. If it's not raining. Because, I don't like my bike and me getting wet.
My old bike was very old. It was over 6 years old. So, I need new one. So, we went to a bike store in downtown, last Sunday. We searched for the best bike. But blue one is too big, and red one is too expensive. And white one is small. But black one has perfect-sized and not so expensive. So, we bought the black one. When we are going out of the store, I couldn't wait to try my bike. So, I rode bike at the near by park. I rode my bike back to my house, too.
Today, I rode my bike in schoolyard. And I rode 10 times around the schoolyard. So, I am tired, but I want to ride my bike tomorrow, too. If it's not raining. Because, I don't like my bike and me getting wet.