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작성자 : eli***   ·   2016-12-28

I want to go 세부 1 more.
I want to 1 more time in 세부 sea.
세부 sea is clean, many fish!
AND 세부 mango is so great!

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I want to go to ¼¼º? 1 once more.
I want to 1 more time in visit the ¼¼º? sea again. ¼¼º?
sea is clean, it has many fish fishes!
AND ¼¼º? mango is so great!



Thank you for writing about this paragraph Ellie.

Are you about the Philippines or other places?

Please try to use their proper international name next time.

Also, please take notice about the singular of plural form of the noun.

The same thing with the proper tense of the verb.


But you keep on getting better Ellie, just keep on practicing and keep on growing.

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