Once upon a time, there was a god call dodo. The dodo wanted to have a friend, so he order his fellow birds to make a creature that is smart. However, the birds were smart by that century. They think to thought about make making humans, but  people become started to hate dodo's lead. They planned to kill dodo by using other animals. They have a tale that dodo live on a an island. The king telled tolled to shot the bomb was shot to kill dodo. Also, the animals tried to eat the dodo's egg.
Finally, the dodo was shot and the last dodo egg was eaten. They had success succeeded, but  with out dodo's leadership, people began to fight. Huge battle had started, and country has formed, but still, countries needed a leader, so that is the reason that why we has have a president, prime minister, or a king.

This is a nice story Michael. It is quite interesting and deep.

There are just some grammatical flaws as follows:

* verb tenses

*proper spacing and punctuation marks

*  articles

Thank you!