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ESSAY 16(Merry christmas^^)
작성자 : joj*** · 2016-12-25
I found out that Myobongam is the most famous ruins in Korea. In the internet it said that it became a ruin on 3.25(?) but I'm not sure. Because it was hard for me to find it in the internet. But it said it was broken down in 3.25. And it is famous ^^.
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I found out that Myobongam is the most famous ruins in Korea. On the internet, it said that it became a ruin on 3.25(?) but I'm not sure. because it was hard for me to find it on the internet. However, it said it was broken down in 3.25. Also, it is famous ^^.
Merry Christmas!
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I saw on the internet that it is a temple and you were right that it's stunning and famous. I hope you can visit there. 