Augest August 21 Sunday 2016
Grandma`s famliy uncle`s family and my family Our family went to waterpool. I ate lunch and I made a rock bridge, but who`s brake somebody broke the bridge, and I`m I got angry.
That time aunt catch catched 4 fish fishes.
But grandma said take out the fish and I take out told us to set them free.
I love this waterpool.!!!!!!!!!


Augest August 14 Sunday 2016
Me and my family walked in on the street, I said Mom!! I want to ice cream!!~
Then my famliy went to (Lotteria).
And we buy bought 3 ice cream.
1 is for mom and dad, 1 is for Brian.1 is for mine me.
It is so delicious.

Hi Ellie, it was fun reading about your memorable summer experiences. You keep on getting better. Please just take note about the following:

* precise spelling

* proper punctuation marks

* verb tenses

* nouns and pronouns

Thank you very much.