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작성자 : son*** · 2016-12-20
Someday he was very very angry, he threatened at Lotto salesman and he was go to jail with his wife, he was dead soon but his wife is not dead and he called her son and she said,"You must be leave, many people wants to be king and they must wants to kill you."
The son believe his mother and he was leave.
he help from sun wukong for flying but soilder shot arrow and he was in the rocket and he space.
In the space he saw Doraemon he and Doraemon became a best friend.
He was very upset and he borrow lazer gun and shot at the soilder but acidently the lazer gun shot at biglight and the lazer is every korea shot.
Luckly his mom had a good reflexes and she jumped and she landed doraemon and her son live.
Sadly Hera saw it she was jealous about son and mom who had very good treatment.
She kill son and mom! Zeus saw it too and he was very sorry for son and mom, and he made called, 'hat'.
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Once upon a time there was a king who bought many Lotto almost every day but he only spend money.
One day he was very angry, he threatened the Lotto salesman and he was put to jail with his wife, he was dead soon but his wife was not dead and he called her son and she said,"You must leave, many people wanted to be a king and they wanted to kill you."
The son believed his mother and he was left.
He asked the help of sun wukong to fly but soilders shot arrow and he was in the rocket and in space.
In the space he saw Doraemon and they became a best friend.
He was very upset and he borrowed lazer gun and he shot the soldiers
but accidently the lazer gun shot at biglight and the lazer was pull back
and every korean was shot.
Luckily his mom had a good reflexes and she jumped and she landed Doraemon and her son lived.
Sadly Hera saw it and she was jealous about the son and the mother
who were closed to each other.
Hera killed them! Zeus saw it too and he was very sorry for them and he called it 'hat'.