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작성자 : eli*** · 2016-12-17
SNOW DAY
I want to see snow.
A white,round snow.
I want to play snowball with my friends.
I want to see snow in Korean sky.
A white snow,A big and small snow.
I want to see snow.
In Korean sky......
I want to see snow.
A white,round snow.
I want to play snowball with my friends.
I want to see snow in Korean sky.
A white snow,A big and small snow.
I want to see snow.
In Korean sky......
답변
SNOW DAY'
I want to see snow
A white,round snow
I want to play snowball with my friends
I want to see snow At the Korean sky
White, Big ansd small
I want to see snow
At the Korean sky