A scary earthquake happened in Gyeongju. There has been many earthquake in Gyeongju this year. Last April or May, my family and I went to Gyeongju. An earthquake occurred that time. Usually, my family and I go to Gyeongju twice a year. But this year we only went once there, because we are afraid of the earthquake.

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I'm very afraid about Gyeongju! Gyeongju is just near Geoje, and I live at Geoje!!! I'm afraid of the earthquake!

I appreciate this article that you made Eli!

This is really the most current and events in your place.

Your idea is very good. Please just take note of the following:

* article

*accurate verb tenses

*Avoid repeating a word or the name of a noun too much, because it will sound redundant.

* Use pronoun as substitute for nouns like we, it, and them.

Thank you Eli!