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작성자 : asd***   ·   2016-12-14

Nowadays,I'm extremely busy working so I want to recharge of my batteries in weekends.
For these weekends I became a couch potato which is not my routine life style.
My wife and daughter understand me with love and didn't bother me.it is thanksful.
But I make it a point participate in sport club in saturday moring.
We play a screen golfwhich in playing an indoor golf virtually.
Considering the economic effect and convinience the screen golf provies great value and we love it.
In saturday evening I'm home alone.other family members go to catholic church.
I'm not a catholic but advocate their religious beliefs so I don't mind.
These were my latest weekend life.

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Nowadays, I'm extremely busy working so I want to recharge of my batteries on weekends.
For these  last weekend, I became a couch potato which is not in my routine life style.
My wife and daughter understand me with love and didn't bother me. It is(That's why) I am thankful (to them ).
But I make it a point to participate in sport club on Saturday morning.
We played a screen golf which is playing an indoor golf ,virtually.
Considering the economic effect and convenience the screen golf provides great value and we love it.
Last Saturday evening, I'm alone at home. Other family members went to Catholic church.
I'm not a Catholic but I advocate their religious beliefs so I don't mind.
These were my latest weekend life.

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