| Hello, everyone! I I am deeply honored It was 3 years ago when PLEASE BE MINDFUL OF THE FF: 1. CHOICE OF WORDS What is the difference between everyone and everybody? Both of these words mean "every person," However, it's worth mentioning that many people think everybody is a little more casual (more informal) than everyone. FOOLED- to behave in a silly or embarrassing way vs. CONVINCED to be completely certain about something. 2.VERB TENSES 3. SUBJECT VERB-AGREEMENT 4. SPELLING 5. CAPITALIZATION/ SPACING 6. PUNCTUATION MARK Hello, Doug! I just revised the words in your sentences. I wish you all the best! Way to go. - Teacher Michelle |