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작성자 : mau***   ·   2016-12-08

Hello! Everybody. My name is Jeon Do Wook.
I want to tell you the story from my English life.
I am honored and deeply moved to be here because I could never imagine speaking English 3 years ago.
One day, my dad suddenly came to me and asked “how about living abroad for 2 years or so”. At first I didn’t take the news very serious and thought it was a kind of joke. Before long, when my parent told me “we have decided to live abroad, to be more specific, in England”. I told them I didn’t want to go aboard and my dad answered me “if you want to go back to Korea in the UK, we will do”. So, I said OK because I was fooled by his words. I was scared but still had doubts because the leaving day was very far away. Truth be told, I thought knowing the meaning of police was good enough at English because I studied English only in a school and I had never taken any private lessons.

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Hello, everyone! body! My name is Jeon Do Wook. 
I want would like to tell you the story from my English life my experiences in learning English. 
I am deeply honored and  to be moved to be here.  because I could not never imagined speaking that I could speak using English.
It was
3 years ago when One day, my dad suddenly came to  approached me and asked if how about living abroad for 2 years or so.At first, I didn't take the news very seriously and thought it was a kind of joke. Before long, when my parents told me that they have already decided to live abroad, to be more specific, in England. I told them that I don't want to go to abroad and my dad answered me had given me a condition and that was, if I wanted to go back to Korea while when we are were in the UK formerly, we will do he said. So, I said OK agreed with it because I was fooled convinced by his words. I was scared but still had doubts because the leaving day was very far away that country is far away from the place that I used to live in. Truth to be told, I thought learning knowing the meaning of police English grammar was good enough. at  in English.  because As a result of, I have been studying English only in a at school and  however, I've had never taken any private lessons.


PLEASE BE MINDFUL OF THE FF: 
1. CHOICE OF WORDS
What is the difference between everyone and everybody? 
Both of these words mean "every person," However, it's worth mentioning that many people think everybody is a little more casual (more informal) than everyone.
FOOLED- to behave in a silly or embarrassing way vs. CONVINCED to be completely certain about something.

2.VERB TENSES
3. SUBJECT VERB-AGREEMENT
4. SPELLING
5. CAPITALIZATION/ SPACING
6. PUNCTUATION MARK

Hello, Doug! I  just revised the words in your sentences. I wish you all the best! Way to go.
- Teacher Michelle

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