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작성자 : mau*** · 2016-12-07
I don't think money cant't buy your happiness. when money is the only thing you have you wouldn't be happy enough, because money do not buy you everything.
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I don't think money cant't buy your happiness. When money is the only thing you have; moreover, you wouldn't be happy enough, because money do not cannot buy you for everything.
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1. Sentence construction
2. choice of words
3. capitalization
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