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Where I will go if all of the things are sufficient

작성자 : vau***   ·   2016-11-27

Everybody in the world certainly wants to have bountiful amount of money or anything which represents the wealth. Related to this, if one inquires me about the case if I have a lot of possessions and where to go for a meal for your parents, I am going to answer that it should be a very luxurious restaerunt indeed.Speaking more specifically about this place, that must be 'OUTBACK'. Here is the place where is from Austrailia and sells the steak and french fries which are suitable to the Western Food. Different from Korean dish that fills the stomach with liquid like soup, the dishes served in outback are usually to be a high-quality meat. The reason why I prefer this place for the meal is that here is the most favorable restaurent where you can fiil up with sufficient nutrient. The steak I mentioned before contains a lot of carbonhydrate giving an aid for an active body and speedy caculations of the brain. Incidentlly, the vegetable salad including much vitamin helps you regulate the nutrient consumed into you. Until here , I talked about the place I recommend and the reason for it.

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Everybody certainly wants to have a bountiful amount of money or anything that represents wealth. In relation to this, if one asks me if I have a lot of possessions and where to go for a meal with my parents, I am going to answer that it should be in a very luxurious restaurant. If they ask me what specific restaurant it is, the name of the restaurant is 'OUTBACK'. It is a restaurant from Australia that serves steak and french fries which is more of a Western Food. It is different from Korean dish that serves more on soup and its like. The foods served in outback is a high-quality meat. The reason why I prefer this restaurant for meal is because our body can get a lot of nutrients from the food that they serve. The steak contains a lot of carbohydrate that is good to make our body active and it makes our brain function fast. And also, the vegetable salad have a lot of vitamin minerals that helps you regulate the nutrient that you consumed. Until here, I am talking about the place that I recommend and the reason why I chose that restaurant.


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~ restaerunt - restaurant
~ carbonhydrate - carbohydrate


Great job, Vaughn!

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