Last weekend, I went to Lotte World.
First, I rode a train and it moved around then up and down.
Second, I rode Altlantis.
I waited for an hour but I was able to ride it, it was fun and scary because it's very fast. In an hour the train goes 72 km and the train went down in right angle and the wind was very strong!
I want the Lotte world art museum.
The picture that I took there was very funny.
I also rode different rides and all of it is not scary except Atlantis. And you mustn't go to the ghost house because it is very petty.

PLEASE BE MINDFUL OF THE FF.:
1. Sentence Organization
2. Articles
3. Verb Tenses
4. Choice of words
- instead of using "windingly" you can say it like this, [...the wind was very strong] 
5. Spelling
- "piture" should be "picture"
- "funy" should be "funny"

Great Job, Ryan!