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작성자 : mau*** · 2016-11-09
I think Korean women usually work before grtting married. I think it is because when women gets married they could have a child and if you have a child, you have to take care of them. so I think it would be harder to work after the marriage. However systems changed a lot so it is now getting easier to look after the child during work
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I think Korean women usually work before getting married. I think it is because when women gets married they could have a child and if you have a child, you have to take care of them. So I think it would be harder for women to work after the marriage. However, systems change a lot so it is now getting easier to look after the child during work.
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