In Korea we have many holidays such as Children's day, Hangul day and so on. Today, I will talk about Christmas. In Korea, we don't have Santa Claus. In Norway there is a Santa Claus but no Rudolf. Young children read carefully please, in Norway there is Santa and he gives presents to Norway children only! Your parents give presents when you're asleep and then hide. If you don't believe what I'm saying, watch this drama ??´???¶?1988. Santa is not real. Last year I didn't believe it so much and I asked my mom about Santa. If you want to see Santa, you must live in Norway. Sorry children, but there is no Santa.

Please be mindful and take note of the following corrections:
1. Spelling
Example: Norrway - Norway; blieve - believe; yong - young

2. Tenses
Example: There was Santa, but there is no Rudolf - There is a Santa Claus but no Rudolf; Today, i talk about Christmas - Today, I will talk about Christmas

3. Subject verb agreement
Example: Young childrens listen carefully (children - plural) - no need to put an /s/

4. Capitalization
Example: santa - Santa; korea - Korea