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plastic ban
작성자 : eth*** · 2016-10-21
I think the plastic ban is helpful for our earth.
There were 3reason. 1reason is the seasbirds eat the plastic when people trushed at the ocean, the sea birds could die.
2reason is undersea creatures could be dangerous to.
3reason is the most important reason. The earth could be dirty and the earth creatures could die. so i think we have to ban the plastic.
There were 3reason. 1reason is the seasbirds eat the plastic when people trushed at the ocean, the sea birds could die.
2reason is undersea creatures could be dangerous to.
3reason is the most important reason. The earth could be dirty and the earth creatures could die. so i think we have to ban the plastic.
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CORRECTION/S:
I think the plastic ban is helpful to Earth. There are three reason. One is that seabirds eat the plastic when people trash in the ocean, the sea birds could die. Second, undersea creatures can be in danger, too. Third is the most important reason. The Earth will be a mess and creatures could die. So, I think we have to ban the plastic.
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