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작성자 : joj***   ·   2016-10-23

I say it is fine to ban using plastic spoons or forks. I think it is just fine because we will have to protect the nature and who care if they ban it first? They are hard to destroy, if we burn them the smoke will pollute the air and they took a long time to rot so that should do with spoons and forks.

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In my opinion, I say it is fine to ban the use of using plastic spoons or forks. I think it is good just fine because we will be able to have to protect the nature and who care if they ban it first? They are difficult hard to destroy. If if we burn them, the smoke will pollute the air and it will take  they took a long time to rot so, it will better to ban the use of that should do with spoons and forks.


 


 

 Hello!~ You did a good job with your homework ^^ Please take note of the words I inserted. I changed some of the words so you can check the diffrences. Also, I want you to be more familiar with tenses okay? Keep it up!

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