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작성자 : say***   ·   2016-10-21

I like kimchi.Beacause it is very drlicaus.Kimchi is a little hot.You can eat kimchi with rice.Wan you eat kimchi amd rice will more delicaus.

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I like kimchi because it is very delicious. Kimchi is a little spicy. You can eat kimchi with rice. It is more delicious when you eat it with rice.

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