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작성자 : jeo***   ·   2016-10-20

Teacher~ I did my homework!

a story about flying animal.

One day in forest there is a very pretty bird contest.
" First pretty bird is parrot!!!"
Hello! parrot You think your is very pretty bird???
" Yes! I am very pretty bird! ho ho ho!"
" And second pretty bird is dove!"
Hello! dove! do you think your very pretty?
"yes!"
"And last pretty bird is seagull!"
Hello seagull! do you think your is pretty bird??
" Yes"
Okay! today pretty bird is parrot!!!
WOW congratulation!!
" thank you" said parrot.

답변

Teacher~ I did my homework!

A story about flying animals.

One day in the forest, there is a prettiest bird contest.
"The first pretty bird is the parrot!"
Hello, parrot. Do you think you are a very pretty bird???
" Yes, I am a very pretty bird."
" And The second pretty bird is the dove."
Hello, dove! Do you think you are a very pretty?
"Yes, I do!"
"And the last pretty bird is the seagull."
Hello, seagull! Do you think you are a pretty bird??
"Yes, I do."
Okay! The prettiest bird today is the parrot!
Wow! Congratulations!
"Thank you" said the parrot.



BE MINDFUL OF:
~> Capitalization
~> Punctuation
~> Sentence Construction
~> Article (a & the)
~> Your VS You're





Good evening, Kelly! I liked the story that you have here. Kindly check the corrections I made for you. Have a great weekend~!

 

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