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If having a lot of money does bring many people

작성자 : vau***   ·   2016-10-16

People generally rely on a person who has enough property. Some might think that those are bad and greedy about being close only to one who is wealthy,but it is the ture society.Even for my opinion, i think that people tend to depend on ones whose estates are abudant. Especially for adults being, they usually try to be a friend with rich people.For more specific explanation, they attemt to recieve money from him or her as they consider that it would be acceptale to take money without any givings with the person being generous if getting wealthy.It is also a case for the youngor the children. The students who are rich originally take a pocket money like fifty thousand one a day. This usually lead him to associate with a lot of friends.For now, I have nothing to say.But, this is certain that I will not be a greedy person who tries to be a company with a plentiful money.

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People generally rely on a person who has enough property. Some might think that those are bad and greedy about being close only to one who is wealthy,but it is the truth in a society.Even for in my opinion, I think that people tend to depend on ones whose estates are abundant. Especially for adults being, they usually try to be a friends with rich people. For more specific explanation, they attempt to receive money from him or her as they consider that it would be acceptable to take money without any givings back to with the person being generous if and getting wealthy. It is also a case for the young or the children. The students who are rich originally take receive a pocket money like fifty thousand one a day. This usually leads him to associate with a lot of friends. For now, I have nothing to say. But, this is certain that I will not be a greedy person who tries to be a company with a plentiful of money.

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