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My Favorite musical instrument
작성자 : lov*** · 2016-10-10
My favorite musical instrument is Piano.
I start piano class at 8 years old.
I go to piano class everyday.
I like to play the piano.
I like piano than another musical instruments because when I play the pino, I can listen to music.
Now I can play many songs with piano.
I start piano class at 8 years old.
I go to piano class everyday.
I like to play the piano.
I like piano than another musical instruments because when I play the pino, I can listen to music.
Now I can play many songs with piano.
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My favorite musical instrument is piano.
I started having piano class at the age of 8 years old.
I go to my piano class everyday.
I like to play the piano.
I like piano than any other musical instruments because when I play the piano, I can listen to music.
Now, I can play many songs with piano.
Very good Amanda, You are doing a great job!
Just be mindful of using the proper tense of the verb, proper words and punctuations. :)