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My favorite book
작성자 : lov*** · 2016-10-05
In this book, therer is two character, Annie and Jack.
Annie is 7 years old and Jack is just like me (maybe 9 years old)
Annie likes to pretend stuff but Jack don't like that.
Oneday they went to the forest, at there They found Magic Tree house.
They can go to another world, when they point some picture in the book and then wish to go there.
It's what I love about it.
When they go there, they help peaple.
The end of story they come back to home from the time off Dinosaurs.
But time didn't go when Jack and Annie stay at another world.
They always go to another world.
I wish I can do that with Jack and Annie.
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My favorite book is the "Dinosaurs before Dark". In this book, there are two characters, Annie and Jack. Annie is 7 years old and Jack is just as old as like me (maybe 9 years old). Annie likes to pretend stuff but Jack doesn't like that. One day,
they went to the forest, at there they found the magic tree house.They can go to other worlds, when they just have to point on the pictures on the book and then wish to go there. That's what I love about it. When they went there, they help people. At the end of the story they return back to their home from the time of the Dinosaurs. But the time stops go when Jack and Annie are at another world. They always go to another world. I wish I could do that with Jack and Annie.
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* Subject verb Agreement
* Tenses of the verb
* Punctuations
* Choice of words.
You did a great job with your homework, Amanda! Keep it up! :)