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작성자 : dum*** · 2016-09-20
I can go inline skating in park.
In a park I played inline skating.
And I go to my friends house.
Then, I go to the park, with my friend.
FINISH
In a park I played inline skating.
And I go to my friends house.
Then, I go to the park, with my friend.
FINISH
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I can go inline skating in the park.In the park I played inline skating.I went inline skating in the park today.
Then, I went to my friend's house and we went to the park together. Then, I go to the park, with my friend.FINISH
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