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작성자 : bri***   ·   2016-08-25

Think about another successful person. Do successful people have something in common?

Yes, they are. Successful people are try to be the best. And they don't like to give up when they are difficult to do something. They do more harder. They try more harder. They do everything more harder then before. And, they become successful person.

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Yes, they
do are. Successful people are trying to be the best. A and they don't like to giving up when they are having difficulty to in doing something. They do work and try more harder. They try more harder. They do everything more harder than before. And, until they become successful person.



BE MINDFUL OF:
~> Comparative Adjective
~> Correct usage of Conjunctions
~> Sentence Construction



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