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작성자 : sky*** · 2016-08-24
-What do you like to do when it is snowy?-
1.I like to amke snowman.
When it is snowy, I want to go outside and play in the snow. And I away want to make snowman. In storis, they sad we can make snowman, but is not easy. We can't make the snowball! However I like to make snowman.
2.I like to sleep in the snow.
We can't really sleep in the snow, but we can imagine. Ah~ I think sleep in the snow is grate!
1.I like to amke snowman.
When it is snowy, I want to go outside and play in the snow. And I away want to make snowman. In storis, they sad we can make snowman, but is not easy. We can't make the snowball! However I like to make snowman.
2.I like to sleep in the snow.
We can't really sleep in the snow, but we can imagine. Ah~ I think sleep in the snow is grate!
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-What do you like to do when it is snowy?
1.I like to make a snowman.
When it is snowy, I want to go outside and play in the snow. And I want to make a snowman. In stories, they said we can make a snowman, but is not easy. We can't just make a snowball! However I like to make a snowman.
2.I like to sleep in the snow.
We can't really sleep in the snow, but we can imagine it. Ah~ I think, sleeping in the snow is great!
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