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homework: Write essay about spring
작성자 : man*** · 2016-08-17
The weather is warm in spring, so we go outside many times.
We go camping and go to the flower festival.
ex) cherry blossom festival
Farmers start farmwork because the weather is warm.
Apples, strawberry, blueberry are grow very weel so we eat it usually.
I'm so sad that the Philippines don't have four season.
If you have a time, come and fell spring.
We go camping and go to the flower festival.
ex) cherry blossom festival
Farmers start farmwork because the weather is warm.
Apples, strawberry, blueberry are grow very weel so we eat it usually.
I'm so sad that the Philippines don't have four season.
If you have a time, come and fell spring.
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The weather is warm in spring during spring is warm, so we usually go outside many times.
We go camping andgo to the flower festival.
ex) For example is the Cherry Blossom Festival
Farmers start farmwork farming because the weather is warm.
Apples, strawberries, blueberries are grow very well, so we usually eat those fruits it usually.
I'm so sad that the Philippines don't doesn't have four seasons.
If you havea time, come here and feel spring.
BE MINDFUL OF:
~> Sentence Construction
~> Spelling of the Words
~> Plural Form of the Nouns
Good evening, Andrew! Thank you so much for doing your homework. My fingers are crossed that someday I can go to Korea. By the way, you did a great job in doing your homework. Kindly check and analyze the corrections I made for you. See you on Friday~!
We go camping and
ex) For example is the Cherry Blossom Festival
Farmers start farmwork farming because the weather is warm.
Apples, strawberries, blueberries are grow very well, so we usually eat those fruits it usually.
I'm so sad that the Philippines don't doesn't have four seasons.
If you have
BE MINDFUL OF:
~> Sentence Construction
~> Spelling of the Words
~> Plural Form of the Nouns
Good evening, Andrew! Thank you so much for doing your homework. My fingers are crossed that someday I can go to Korea. By the way, you did a great job in doing your homework. Kindly check and analyze the corrections I made for you. See you on Friday~!