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작성자 : dum*** · 2016-08-16
Is whereI want to go certainly of ...
Philippine and United States, Australia, England.
I've never seen in a foreign country too.
Hermeneutics is I wrote to places I wanted to go.
Philippine and United States, Australia, England.
I've never seen in a foreign country too.
Hermeneutics is I wrote to places I wanted to go.
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CORRECTION/S:
I certainly want to go to the Philippines, the United States, Australia, and England.
I've never been to a foreign country.
The places where I want to go were written in hermeneutics.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
1. Sentence Structure
2. Word Choice