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작성자 : joj*** · 2016-08-10
If I because the president.
Then I will deal with the coups like this.
I will just kill them or just put them in jail.
They needs to be punished.
They killed more than 200 people.
But I will punish them differently.
Because they are different persons and they did different things. So I going to punish them differently.
Then I will deal with the coups like this.
I will just kill them or just put them in jail.
They needs to be punished.
They killed more than 200 people.
But I will punish them differently.
Because they are different persons and they did different things. So I going to punish them differently.
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If I became were the president.
Then, I will deal with the coups like this.
I will just kill them or just put them in jail.
They needs to be punished.
They killed more than 200 people.
But However, I will punish them differently because they are different persons people and they did different things. So, I going to punish them differently.
BE MINDFUL OF:
~> Third Conditional
~> Subject Verb Agreement
~> Conjunction
~> Punctuations
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