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작성자 : dum*** · 2016-08-08
I was sad when his moter side it is time to do me.
For example, oysters I gave my brother "quiet--had to do!"
As she loudly to my brother.
Then my brother is scold to cry, my mother cry
just me saying that her younger sister.
And each time I feel like crying.
For example, oysters I gave my brother "quiet--had to do!"
As she loudly to my brother.
Then my brother is scold to cry, my mother cry
just me saying that her younger sister.
And each time I feel like crying.
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CORRECTION/S:
I was sad when my mother told me to do something.
For example, I gave oyster to my brother.
She said, "Be quiet."
She yelled to my brother.
Then, my brother cried because mom scolded him.
My mother cried too.
When it happens, I feel like crying as well.