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작성자 : dum*** · 2016-07-26
My role model is my mom.
My mother is kind and gentle
,and so they are.
The reason I like mom to always
love me and my mom is good at cooking.
My mother is kind and gentle
,and so they are.
The reason I like mom to always
love me and my mom is good at cooking.
답변
My role model is my mom.
My mother is kind and gentle, and so they are.
The reason I like my mom is she always
loves me. And my mom is good at cooking.
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* Sentence construction
* Usage of Pronoun
* Run on sentence