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작성자 : say***   ·   2016-07-27

I did mario.it was fun.Idid mario alone.I did 8ㅡ8. I was hard.I did it froe two hours. I want't to do next too.

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I played Mario alone. It was fun.I did 8¤?8. It was hard.I played it for two hours. I want to do it next time.

 


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