Topic→Tell me the things you like on summer vacation.

First I like go to the ocean.
At the ocean I will do swimming, snorkelling and sight seeing. In the ocean, it is very fun and pleasant place. We eat raw fish. We deliver some chiken. We use copper and bunner, and eat noddles.  Ocean is very fun and good?½
Second, I like to go to swimming pool, and water park. At the water park, we ride on water slide. The slide is scary. But I like slide, Because I like scary things. In swimming pool, we swimming. Summer is very hot. So, we like swimming pools cold water.
Finally, I love ocean, I like water park, My favorite place is swimming pool~~

(p.s)Last week Friday, Saturday, Sunday, snd Monday I went to the water park , and this week Friday, Saturday, and Suunday I will go to the ocean~~~!!
so, I'm very happy and exited.
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