If I will might like to film a Disney movie. I will like to name title my movie 'Into the Forest'. I will make The story will be about wild life also and rare animals. There are many Disney movies that shows wild life for a examples Tarzan, Lion king, Bambi, etc. The story will be like this. There was is a bird named Poppy and it will show how poppy gets he grow up and meet wild creatures. He will suffer but he will be also get happiness in the end. In that movie, I will put animals like tigers(for sure), lions, rabbits, deer, axolotls, turtles, parrots, wild wolves and dogs, snakes and also peococks peacocks too. I will not put monkeys or gorillas in that movie because monkeys they are to similar to people, but this is a wild life movie about wild life so I will not put a monkey in my movie. In the middle, Poppy will meet an axolotl and he will learn people's cruelty and will try to make them stop them. He suffers from it. He gets hurt because of the gun that people are using, but he escapes. Then, than people try to catch his best friend Trample(a fish), but they swim down so people wouldn't catch them. If my classmates read this,  they will surely say wow. I could say this movie is about wild animals VS humans. After writing this, I write I have a my new dream is to be a person who creates movies or a director. 
     

THINGS TO IMPROVE:
~> capitalization
~> punctuation
~> word order
~> plural form of the nouns
~> subject verb agreement
~> spelling 

Hi, Wanda! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I think it will be a blockbuster movie and I would love to watch it. Kindly check the corrections that I made for you. Good job~!