Title:  How to adults can prevent from adults themselves from smoking

Today I tried to write a essay in a different version.
Today, I tried to write an essay in a different version.

Recently I learned about stoping taking a cigratte as the majority of people whose the health gets worse due to smoking nowadays.

Recently, I learned about stoping taking quitting smoking a cigratte as the majority of people whose the health gets worse due to smoking nowadays.

Just saying what I learnned, there are a lot of bad things which badly influence the organizations in our body badly such as nicotin, tare in a cigratte and it dosen't affect at all if it is said that this leads to the various disease like lung cancer.

Just saying what I learnned, there are a lot of bad things which badly influence the organizations in our body such as nicotine and tare in a cigratte and . It does affect our body at all if .It has been said that this leads to the various diseases like lung cancer.

 I thought I won't smoke when being an adult as seeing the picture of a polluted lung and time when i felt the reliatt to this is when my dad used to smoke.

I thought I won't of not smoking when being an adult I grow up as an adult as seeing the picture of a polluted sick lung and that time when I felt the reality of this is when my dad used to smoke.

At that time, being as I was in the first grade and not taking such a lesson yet, it was a hobby for the my father to take a cigratte whenever he gets stressed by overworking.

Of course, I just understood him getting tired, having no alarm about it.

Of course, I just understand him getting that he gets tired, having no alarm worries about it.

However, one day, he started to take a breath have a difficultly in breathing and the whole body acquired the pain which led him to stay at a hospital for about a week. 

The teeth get yellow and the breath is confusing, though I am still young, it was posssible to consider the situation severely.

His teeth got yellow and his breathing was confusing, though I am still young, it was posssible to consider the situation severely.

After that, I peered thoroughly if my dad smokes secretly, and finally, he decided to stop this hobby.

After that, I peered thoroughly if my dad smokes secretly, and finally, he decided to stop this hobby.

Ah, there is another thing to tell you.

Ah, there is another thing I want to tell you.

 To quit smoking, there are two ways. One is to use the vita stick. The another is to plan the punishment to make it easier to stop this actions.

To quit smoking, there are two ways. One is to use the Vita Stick. The another is to plan the punishment to make it easier to stop this actions.