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What do you think is the best source of energy?E xplain why.

작성자 : leo***   ·   2016-06-22

I think solar energy is the best source of energy because it is cheap and it protects nature. Solar panels are expensive,but if you buy it,
it is cheap. Solar panels are shaped like rows of rectangle.
It is blue with silver or gray lines.
I think water energy is the best source,too. Water energy
is cheap and strong. It doesn't harm nature because it is made from water.
I think lightning energy is the best source of energy.Lightning energy
is the strongest energy. It can light a light bulb for almost 1 year when
you once get the lightning energy.
I think wind energy is also the best source of energy. It is made by windmills.
Windmills are shaped like a giant cross. The cross spins because winds
blow and they push the cross. And when it spins,it makes energy.
Coal energy is made from burning up coals. It harms nature and it is expensive.
But many people use coal energy,so I like it.
I think man-made energy is the best,too. Man-made energy is made in factories,
so it harms nature,but people use them,too.
There are many kinds of energies. Some are strong,some are weak.
But they have one thing in common.
It is that they help people in their lives!

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I think, solar energy is the best source of energy because it is cheap and it protects nature. Solar panels are expensive,but if you buy it,
it is cheap. Solar panels are shaped like rows of rectangle.
It is blue with silver or gray lines.

I think, water energy is the best source of energy, too. Water energy
is cheap and strong. It doesn't harm nature because it is made from water. I think, lightning energy is the best a good source of energy. Lightning energy is the strongest energy. It can light a light bulb for almost 1 year when you once get the lightning energy electricity.

I think, wind energy is also the best a good source of energy. It is made by through windmills. Windmills are shaped like a giant cross. The cross spins because winds blow and they push the cross. And when it spins,it makes energy.

Coal energy is made from burning up coals. It harms nature and it is expensive.But many people use coal energy,so I like it. I think man-made energy is the best, good, too. Man-made energy is made in factories, so it harms nature,but people use them,too. There are many kinds of energies. Some are strong,some are weak. But, they have one thing in common.
It is that they help people in their lives!


I think, solar energy is the best source of energy because it is cheap and it protects nature. Solar panels are expensive,but if you buy it, it is cheap. Solar panels are shaped like rows of rectangle. It is blue with silver or gray lines.

I think, water is the best source of energy, too. Water energy is cheap and strong. It doesn't harm nature because it is made from water. I think, lightning is a good source of energy. Lightning energy is the strongest energy. It can light a light bulb for almost 1 year when you once get the electricity.

I think, wind is a good source of energy. It is made through windmills. Windmills are shaped like a giant cross. The cross spins because winds blow and they push the cross. And when it spins,it makes energy.

Coal energy is made from burning up coals. It harms nature and it is expensive. But many people use coal energy,so I like it. I think man-made energy is good, too. Man-made energy is made in factories, so it harms nature,but people use them, too. There are many kinds of energies. Some are strong,some are weak. But, they have one thing in common. It is that they help people in their lives!

SOMETHING TO REMEMBER:
- Best is the superlative of good. It is used to descibe something which is better than any other.

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