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The title : The most rewarding thing that I have done as a mother.

작성자 : cel***   ·   2016-06-21

I think it is hard to raise my kid with good and proper thought. Sometimes I am not sure which is right when I have to decide for my son in regard to education, caring, social relationship, and so on. Then I used to pray. I used to tell my son God with us. I think it is the most rewarding thing to tell my son the power of gospel, praying and the words of God. I always do my best to help my son. Most of all I feel rewarding I can deliver religious belief as a mother. It is the big power to struggle in his future life.

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I think it is hard to raise my kid with good and proper thought. Sometimes I am not sure which is right when I have to decide for my son in regard to education, caring, social relationship, and so on. Then I used to pray. I used to tell my son God is with us. I think it is the most rewarding thing to tell my son;  the power of gospel, praying and the words of God. I always do my best to help my son. Most of all, it is fulfilling that I can deliver religious belief as a mother. It is the big power to struggle in his future life.

 


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