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작성자 : joj*** · 2016-06-20
If I was stuck in a plane and if the plane begins to crash I will use my phone. Because anyone could be terrified because of the sudden crash.
But if we think quickly we could call somebody with our phone of we put on our life vest. We could save our lives or save many other peoples lives by thinking fast and acting quickly.
But if we think quickly we could call somebody with our phone of we put on our life vest. We could save our lives or save many other peoples lives by thinking fast and acting quickly.
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CORRECTION/s:
If I'd be stuck in a plane that's about to crash, I would use my phone. Anyone could be terrified because of the unexpected crash.
I believe that if we would think quickly, we could call somebody using our phone and we can still do something to protect ourselves. We could save ourselves and save other people's lives by thinking quickly and never panic.
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