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If you are the captain of your own sailing ship,where do you want to direct your crew and ship?
작성자 : leo*** · 2016-06-20
the ice I was walking on can be thin ice. I can also need to climb on a glacier
but the glacier can float the wrong way. There is almost no people living there
(except my crews).But I still want to try it.
Sailing to North Pole can be dangerous,too. My ship can hit an iceberg and
sink like Titanic,or we can sail the wrong way and end up in South Pole.
If I landed on the middle of the North Pole,I need to walk to the end.
That will be harder tham just landing on the end. If I land on the end and
I am walking to the other end,and if my compass went wrong I could end up
in where I started. But still, I want to sail to the North Pole and
walk from the end to the other end.
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I will direct the crew and the ship to the North Pole. I want to try to reach the end a border of the North Pole to the other end and explore its extremity. It will be dangerous because the ice I might be walking on can be is thin ice. I might also need to climb on a glacier. But, the glacier can float the wrong way. There is almost no people living there (except my crews). But, I still want to try it.
Sailing to North Pole can be dangerous, too. My ship can hit an iceberg and sink like theTitanic or we can sail the wrong way and end up in the South Pole. If I landed at the middle of the North Pole, I need to walk to the end border. That will be harder than just landing at a borderline. If I land at a end border and I am walking to the other end border, and if my compass went wrong, I could end up on where I started. But, still, I want to sail to the North Pole and walk from the end borders to the other border.
I will direct the crew and the ship to the North Pole. I want to try to reach a border of the North Pole and explore its extremity. It will be dangerous because the ice I might be walking on is thin. I might also need to climb on a glacier. But, the glacier can float the wrong way. There is almost no people living there (except my crews). But, I still want to try it.
Sailing to North Pole can be dangerous, too. My ship can hit an iceberg and sink like the Titanic or we can sail the wrong way and end up in the South Pole. If I land at the middle of the North Pole, I need to walk to the border. That will be harder than just landing at a borderline. If I land at a border and I walk to the other border, and if my compass went wrong, I could end up on where I started. But, still, I want to sail to the North Pole and walk borders to border.
SOMETHING TO REMEMBER:
A border is the part or edge of an are that forms its outer boundery.