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작성자 : yew*** · 2016-06-20
My name is YEWON.
My sister is JIWON.
She is 9 years old. And she likes drawing a picture.
My father's name is DONGHWAN. He works in bank.
But when weekend, he is a great cook too.
My mom's name is SEONYOUNG. She works in a company.
When she back home, she is a great storyteller.
My sister is JIWON.
She is 9 years old. And she likes drawing a picture.
My father's name is DONGHWAN. He works in bank.
But when weekend, he is a great cook too.
My mom's name is SEONYOUNG. She works in a company.
When she back home, she is a great storyteller.
답변
My name is Yewon.
My sister is Jiwon.
She is 9 years old and she likes drawing a picture.
My father's name is Donghwan. He works in bank.
But during the weekend, he is a great cook too.
My mom's name is Seonyoung. She works in a company.
When she goes home, she is a great storyteller.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
-Punctuation
-Choice of words
Good job for introducing your family Yewon! 