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Do you conserve energy? How?
작성자 : leo*** · 2016-06-15
I conserve energy by turning off the water when I am not using it,turning off the lights and walking instead of riding cars.
Walking instead of riding cars is conserving energy because cars emit and emitting harms nature.But walking doesn't harm natures,so I walk when I go to a short distance.
I turn off the lights,too. It helps because turning off lights saves electricity,and saving electricities is good.
I use papers again. Using papers again helps by cutting less trees.
Just one person uses almost three trees a year.You will think it is less amount
of trees,but thirty people can use almost ninty trees a year.
I also turn off the water when I'm not using it.It helps
the fishes in the river because if you use large amount of water, the
fishes will die of thirst or will die because there will
be no water left.
I conserve energy in four different ways!
Walking instead of riding cars is conserving energy because cars emit and emitting harms nature.But walking doesn't harm natures,so I walk when I go to a short distance.
I turn off the lights,too. It helps because turning off lights saves electricity,and saving electricities is good.
I use papers again. Using papers again helps by cutting less trees.
Just one person uses almost three trees a year.You will think it is less amount
of trees,but thirty people can use almost ninty trees a year.
I also turn off the water when I'm not using it.It helps
the fishes in the river because if you use large amount of water, the
fishes will die of thirst or will die because there will
be no water left.
I conserve energy in four different ways!
답변
Do you conserve energy? How?
I conserve energy by turning off the faucet when I am not using water, turning off the lights and walking instead of riding cars.Walking instead of riding cars is a way of conserving energy because cars emit
I turn off the lights,too. It helps because turning off lights saves electricity and saving electricity consumption is good.
I reuse papers
If one person uses almost three trees a year, you might think it is only a few amount of trees. But, thirty people can use almost ninety trees a year.
I also turn off the faucet when I'm not using water. It helps
the fishes in the river because if you use large amount of water, the
fishes will die of thirst or will die because there will be no water left.
I conserve energy in four different ways!
Do you conserve energy? How?
I conserve energy by turning off the faucet when I am not using water, turning off the lights and walking instead of riding cars.
Walking instead of riding cars is a way of conserving energy becuase cars emit harmful substances to nature. But, walking doesn't harm nature. So, I walk when I go to a place at a short distance.
I turn off the lights, too. It helps because turning off the lights saves electricity and saving electricity consumption is good.
I reuse papers. Reusing papers helps lessen the cutting of trees. If one person uses almost three trees a year, you might think it is only a few amount of trees. But, thirty people can use almost ninety trees a year.
I also turn off the faucet when I'm not using water. It helps the fishes in the river because if you use large amount of water, the fishes will die of thirst or will die because there will be no water left.
I conserve energy in four different ways!
I conserve energy by turning off the faucet when I am not using water, turning off the lights and walking instead of riding cars.
Walking instead of riding cars is a way of conserving energy becuase cars emit harmful substances to nature. But, walking doesn't harm nature. So, I walk when I go to a place at a short distance.
I turn off the lights, too. It helps because turning off the lights saves electricity and saving electricity consumption is good.
I reuse papers. Reusing papers helps lessen the cutting of trees. If one person uses almost three trees a year, you might think it is only a few amount of trees. But, thirty people can use almost ninety trees a year.
I also turn off the faucet when I'm not using water. It helps the fishes in the river because if you use large amount of water, the fishes will die of thirst or will die because there will be no water left.
I conserve energy in four different ways!
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