I like stars.I can see stars at night.They twinkle so beautifully. I can see many stars in the countryside, but not in the cities. And in the afternoon, I can't see stars because the sun hides the stars. One day, I went to a science museum.The teacher taught me about stars. Next time,I will study more about stars.

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Thank you for sharing about how you like stars Amily. Good job!