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작성자 : lit*** · 2016-06-07
The problem is fine dust.Because it makes people very sick or die.Dut, we can change it.We should walk to the place near me.Or we can use bicycle in stad of cars.
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The problem is fine dust air polution. Because, it makes people very sick or and die.But, we can change prevent it. We should walk to go to another place which is near me. Or Also, we can use a bicycle in stad instead of cars.
The problem is air pollution. Because, it makes people very sick and die. But, we can prevent it. We should walk to go to another place which is near. Also, we can use a bicycle instead of cars.
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