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작성자 : rkd*** · 2016-06-01
my dream is teacher.
I like read books and teach.
but,I need to study hard.
becase,most teacher is smart.
study is important for my dream.
I'm good for korean,but math is not bad.........but I practice hard math.
please be a teacher in my future!!!
I like read books and teach.
but,I need to study hard.
becase,most teacher is smart.
study is important for my dream.
I'm good for korean,but math is not bad.........but I practice hard math.
please be a teacher in my future!!!
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My dream is to be a teacher.
I like to read books and teach so I need to study hard because most teacher are smart. Study is important for my dream. I'm good in Korean and Math is not bad.........but I practice hard Math.
Please, I want to be a teacher in my future!!!
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