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작성자 : dum***   ·   2016-05-25

I'm a famous musician,
I have concert in the music theater.
I play pinand, dram and sing and song.
But ir is not my dream.

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I'm a famous musician.
I have a concert in the music theater.
I play 
the piano and drums. I sing a song.
But it is not my dream.

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