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작성자 : dum*** · 2016-05-25
I'm help my mom and chorse is
my mother is tired and mom have many thing.
Help my mom is tired. But it so funny .
It so good.
But sometimes I don't want help to my mom.
my mother is tired and mom have many thing.
Help my mom is tired. But it so funny .
It so good.
But sometimes I don't want help to my mom.
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I'm help my mom and chorse is my mother is tired and mom have many thing.
>>I help my mom in doing the chores when she s tired and has many things to do.
Help my mom is tired. But it so funny .
>>Helping my mom is tiring but it's fun.
It so good.
>> It's so good.
But sometimes I don't want help to my mom.
>>Correct!
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