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작성자 : jun*** · 2016-05-21
My favorite weather is windy.
Because it's cool so I don't sweat and not tired.
When I do exercise in windy day, I don't get tired.
And second favorite weather is snowy.
Because I can make snowman and do snow fight with friends.
Snow fight is very fun.
Because it's cool so I don't sweat and not tired.
When I do exercise in windy day, I don't get tired.
And second favorite weather is snowy.
Because I can make snowman and do snow fight with friends.
Snow fight is very fun.
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My favorite weather is windy because it's cool so I don't sweat and don't feel tired.
When I exercise during windy, I don't get tired.
My second favorite weather is snowy because I can make snowman and do snow fighting with my friends.
Snow fighting is very fun.
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Thank you for sharing your favorite weather Chris! 