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작성자 : dum***   ·   2016-05-16

My family is watching soccer game.
See sometimes turned the TV.
So watch anyway, there is no fun.
But somtimes fun.

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CORRECTION/S:

My family watches soccer games.
I sometimes see the TV turned on.
So, I watch anyway. There is no fun.
But sometimes, it's fun.


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