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Numbers that made one unfortunate

작성자 : vau***   ·   2016-05-15

Most people depend themselves on the supertitions, especially number they always use and utilize for the work. Though those numebers don't really affect people's lives in great lives in great or gloomy mood, thinking of myself being unlucky cause us to perform badly as it discourages the will of a person. However, we sho are very sensitive to those religious things, the government or the group subtract the bad numbers like four or thirteen included on the floor. They think there would be only detrimental things happening. If we just have a faith in supersititous things, there won't be any development in our lives and it is important for us not to trust those beliefs and I want to spreadd my opinion about this. And, I think numbers like 4, or 13 affects the performance.
First of all, the performance is decided on how they think and feel about the work. To make a good result, it is important to have a good condition. If they take a consideration of being unlucky as the bad number is viewed as a source of misfortune. Even in realiaty, most people who are strong in religious beliefs about those signs, usually failed and did not succeed the goal they try to acheive. In other words, the physics, the mind or how they expect about their performance is a greatly affecting point. To avoid this myth, there should be a lucky object in the opposite site which makes them feel relieved.
Secondly, there are many evidences that numbers that are seen as cursing symbols. Only the person who is related to those signals and saw them had one accident or if it is the businessman, they got fired suddenly just in one day. Scientists still can't explain why that is happening, but people certainly think it is the curse of 4 and 13 which stands for the death. Non- scientifically, some supernatural power used to be the source of coincidence of fatal accidents. Following this continous coincidence, I cannot help but thinking those numbers badly.
Until here, I have talked about superstitous numbers. Why I think that they influence our lives and affect the one's performance. If we keep those things we are unable to develop more. Finding more and more flaws make us refine that mistake and getting perfect without any errors mean that you are the one who should make the world to be a better place.

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Most people depend themselves on the supertitions, especially numbers. They always use and utilize them for the work. Though those numbers don't really affect people's lives in great lives or in great gloomy mood. I am thinking of myself being unlucky cause I perform badly as it discourages the will of a person. However, we are very sensitive to those religious things, the government or the group subtracted by the bad numbers like four or thirteen included on the floor. They think there would be only detrimental things happening. If we just have a faith in supersititous things, there won't be any development in our lives and it is important for us not to trust those beliefs and I want to spread my opinion about this. And, I think numbers like 4 or 13 affect the performance.
First of all, the performance is decided on how they think and feel about the work. To make a good result, it is important to have a good condition. If they take a consideration of being unlucky as the bad numbers are viewed as a source of misfortune. Even in reality like most people who have a strong in religious belief about those signs, usually when they failed and did not succeed the goal that they try to acheive. In other words, the physical, the mind or how they expect about their performance is a greatly affecting the point. To avoid this myth, there should be a lucky object in the opposite site which makes them feel relieved.
Secondly, there are many evidences that numbers that are seen as cursing symbols. Only the person who is related to those signals and saw them had one accident or if it is the businessman, they got fired suddenly just in one day. Scientists still can't explain why that is happening, but people certainly think it is the curse of 4 and 13 which stands for the death. Non- scientifically, some supernatural power used to be the source of coincidence of fatal accidents. Following this continous coincidence, I cannot help but thinking those numbers badly.
Until here, I have talked about superstitous numbers. Why I think that they influence our lives and affect the one's performance. If we keep those things we are unable to develop more. Finding more and more flaws make us refine that mistake and getting perfect without any errors mean that you are the one who should make the world to be a better place.



 



 

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