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작성자 : red***   ·   2016-05-09

Yey! Tomorrow is the second Children's Day!
The second Children's Day is the same as the first one.
May 5th is the first Children's Day.
After 5 days, children are still happy.
So it's the second Children's Day.
(I made that day)
But I think the children in the world will like it. So when I grow up as a great man, I will make a real second Children's Day.
It will be so exciting.
Also, when I reach the age of 20. I need 9 years more.
Bye!
^-^

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Yey! Tomorrow is the second Children's Day!
The second Children's Day is the same as the first one.
May 5th is the  first Children's Day.
After 5 days, children are still happy.
So it's the  second Children's Day.
(I made that day)
But I think the children in the world will like it. So when I grow up as a great man, I will make a real second  Children's Day.
It will be so exciting.
Also, when I reach the age of 20. I need 9 years more.
Bye!
^-^
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