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SUPERSTITION

작성자 : vau***   ·   2016-05-08

We, people live around the world having many superstitions. As they don't know about a certain obejective exactly, they usually consider it as a true thing believing easily.And, it is called superstition. Though we know it is just fake, this is the one which makes us feel dread and sometimes we also enjoy telling each superstitons each other. As the result, the guardians used to build constructions exceptioning of bad things that are going to happen or occur. The ordeals mentioned from the information realted to superstition are fitted in real lives and the scientists who trust only the logical and possible things are responsible for obviously studying about it. Today, I got interested in it as people made a rumor such as the mouse became a human after eating one's nails and would like to show you two kinds of superstition in this essay.
To begin with, one is that when you take sea mustard soup, you will fail any important contests or tests that should be done well. As sea mustard is slippery, people usually take a consideration of it as we slipped on someting because of its slithery feature. So, they tend not to have sea mustard soup on the day before they have a certain examinationof the subeject.Contrasted to that, eating a glutinous rice cake which relates the stop of the pass as it is sticky This is considered as the way for the students to feel relievedabout feeling free to take an exam.
Secondly, if the sofa is larger than the living room, it becomes the main part or the owner of the living room and it makes people not move freely. And, this intends and cause them to perform or conduct things badly. Moving in a small space is the cause of work efficiency and person who lives in the living room that owns a larger sofa made a bad result after doing something.
Until here, I have talked about two kinds of superstitions I know. One is about sea mustard soup and the other is realted to the size of the sofa. Different from others,I usually think these beliefs as a real one and am dependable on those unbelievable rumors. As my interested is attribured to it.I would like to search and talk more about superstitons.

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We, people, live around the world and haveing many superstitions. As they don't know exactly about a certain objective exactly, they usually consider it as a true thing in an instant believing easily. And, it is called a superstition. Though we know it is just fake a false belief, this is the one which makes us feel dread and sometimes we also enjoy telling each superstitons to each other. As the result, the guardians used to build constructions exceptioning elliminating the bad things that are going to happen or occur. The ordeals mentioned from the information related to superstition are fitted in real lives and the scientists who trust only the logical and possible things that are responsible for obviously studying about it. Today, I got interested in it as people made rumors such as a mouse becoming a human after eating one's nails. I would like to share to you two kinds of superstitions in this essay.
To begin with, one is that when you take sea mustard soup you will fail in any important contests or tests that should be done well. Sea mustard is slippery. People usually take a consideration of it as we slipped on someting because of its slithery feature. So, they tend not to have sea mustard soup on the day before they have a certain examination of some subjects. Contrasted to that, eating a glutinous rice cake which relates not to forget or stick to their heads all the knowledge as it is sticky. This is considered as the way for the students to feel relieved about feeling free to take an exam.
Secondly, if the sofa is larger than the living room, it becomes the main attraction or the owner of the living room and it makes people not to move freely. This intends and causes them to perform or conduct things badly. Moving in a small space is a cause of work efficiency and a person who lives in the living room that owns a larger sofa make a bad result after doing something.
Wrapping up all these and that, I have talked about two kinds of superstitions I know. One is about sea mustard soup and the other is related to the size of the sofa. Different from others, I usually think these beliefs as a real ones and am dependable on those unbelievable rumors as my interest is attributed on it. I would like be glad to search and talk more about superstitons.


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